[To tell you the truth I prefer the worst of you...]

[reenka]

I think I'm in some sort of renewed H/D fugue. I can feel people rolling their eyes, I swear to god :> :> Ah well, I should be asleep, but I wrote a drabble, and it reminds me of Ani DiFranco.


Disclaimer: not mine




- untouchable -



"Hey Potter, which Mudblood are you shagging this week?" He sneers.

A long-suffering sigh. "I told you. Just. Leave me alone."

"Can't take the heat, is that it? Scared of my little wand, Potterhead?"

You turn, eyes slitted. "Are you heading somewhere with this? I really don't feel like a stupid fight, have homework to do, so..."

"You can't walk away from me, Potter!"

"Watch me."

--

"What's gotten into you? Can't sleep at night? Have to pester me in my hour of solitude?"

"Nothing, Malfoy." You kick a stone at the lake, frowning. "I wasn't planning on talking to you, actually."

"You're invading -my- space and you spew that rubbish? Shove right off and you're set! Or do you want me to shut your mouth for you?"

You lean back, staring at the sky, where the moon is half-full. "Don't you ever get tired, Malfoy?"

"Tired?! Bloody hell?" Incredulous.

"Yeah. Tired." You sigh. "I guess not, huh. You probably wouldn't admit being human if I asked, would you." He laughs softly.

"Are you finally gone wrong in the head, Potty? Should I call your little friends to rescue you?"

"Don't bother. It's fine. Do what you want, really."

"Stuff it, Potter! You think you've got any right to--"

"Fine." Another sigh; you get up slowly, kicking up a few rocks. "See you 'round, then."

"Hey!"

--

"Your mother was a filthy Mudblood whore!" Panting. "Say something!"

You stare, eyes burning. "You make me sick--" And walk away.

--

He's yelling, face flushed. "What the fuck do you want from me, Potter? Who do you think you are, anyway? Answer me!"

"I'm no one special, Malfoy. Relax. Go fishing or something, it'll be good for you."

"Don't lay that crap on me! You're trying to trick me, aren't you, Wonder Boy!"

"It's sort of reassuring, you know."

"What is?!" Screeching.

"The way you don't give up."

"You fucker! Come back!"

--

Coughing, you don't blink as the wand is pressed up tight against your throat; impassive. "What do you want, Malfoy?"

"I want you to fight me, arsehole! I want you to pay, and I want all your stupid friends to pay and I want-- I want my father back--!"

"I'm sorry." Quietly. "It's too late for that."

"Are you playing with me?! Didn't you hear me?"

"I heard you. And it's too late. You can't do anything any more than I can. It's about time you figured it out, don't you think?"

"What the fuck are you on about, Potter?!"

"Think about it." You push away his wand, straightening. "Don't tell me when you do."

--

Your eyes are slightly widened as the hands rip at your trouser buttons, the panting growing louder. A gasp as the mouth fastens around your cock, starts sucking. Hips buck without volition and you yell, eyes staring into nothing and fists clenched in soft blond hair.

"Well?" Eyes slightly red, hair disheveled.

You smile slightly. "You could do that again."

Comments

[miss-charmed.livejournal.com]

Eeeeeeeeeee!!! *claps* Yay! More H/D from you :D This is good stuff. Draco going after Harry, wouldn't give up, Harry doing his best to ignore Draco, getting tired of it all, giving in. Wonderful.

You smile slightly. "You could do that again."
Heck yeah *nods*

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Heee I'm glad you liked it (and found it uplifting!) ahahah thanks :D

[shaggirl.livejournal.com]

Oh, your Draco is so angry and needy and desperate for his Potty. <333

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Wah. Now it sounds like my own personal fairy-tale >:D :D :D

[black-dog.livejournal.com]

Poor Draco. He doesn't know what the fuck he wants, does he? And I love him for it. I really like what I take to be his unfocused rage and confusion here. And inscrutable Harry -- I can't decide if he's at peace or just numb. But a nice blowjob would certainly hit the spot for both of them. Yay! :)

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Most probably, neither of them know what they want, so it's hard to give it to them, haha. At peace!Harry seems unlikely, but I think I was trying for 'as nice as he could be' and well....er.... ran up against the Wall of Draco :> Whee, thanks for reading! :D

[licoricegirl.livejournal.com]

Such a believable post-OotP Draco and Harry. Lovely.

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Thank you~:) It's so difficult getting them to change their patterns to something less predictable, but I try :>

[notrafficlights.livejournal.com]

You just like toturing Draco XD.

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

*guilt*
Too true XD
I was trying to get Harry to be nice, but y'know, Draco never plays along ^^; *shifty eyes*

[moshi.livejournal.com]

This is great. Nicely done and very believable. :)

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Thankees, I'm glad it came across that way :) They both can be stubborn bitches sometimes :>

[cursescar.livejournal.com]

*crumbles* Great dialogue! (I mean, I know it's mostly all dialogue but it's good dialogue and not boring as hell dialogue!!) You can SEE Malfoy strictly through this words.

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Wah! I feel so bad now for um... yeah, torturing Draco ^^;;; I was trying to be nice, really (I'm starting to wonder if I've just lost the knack for it). Yeay! Am glad wasn't boring as hell :> :>

[stellabelle.livejournal.com]

Draco is an angry bitch and I am a happy bitch. Yay! Might just be you're on a roll, huh? :)!

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

So you like torturing Draco too, I take it :)) :)) Ours is an elite club :>
I think I'm on a bit of a roll :>! Though I don't think this is good news for Draco ^^;

[hearts-n-roses.livejournal.com]

Oh I like this. I could see it happening.

Draco counts on Harry, and he can't stand it when Harry doesn't fight back.

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Hahaha the boy forgets what happens when Harry fights back too easily. Alas, this way he keeps his dignity :>
Thanks! :D

[balfrog.livejournal.com]

But sex will always lead the way!
(yay!)

and for the cycle of miscommunication that will lead around and around and around... and keep the stories coming (hee hee, am juvenile).

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

*facepalm* Oh man, I didn't mean to make the sex so... uh, like the ultimate solution. I think I ran out of ideas for what Draco could do, you know, to get Harry to be nice to him. I don't think Draco even realizes he wants Harry to be nice to him. They're such idiots. Ahhhhh.

*laughs* I'm glad your read it though (even if I'm like, wtf, I just write a 500-word drabble and.... whuh--?)

[balfrog.livejournal.com]

I think along the way they'll find all sorts of solutions, but it makes things *happen*, yeah! And idiots make the best stories. Feeds my superiority complex. (not kidding)

hee.

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Am currently trying to write a ficlet where Draco avoids sex and tries to uh, be strong. Yeah, somehow it's difficult to write~:)) In a weird way, I feel like the sex was an insult to Draco too (in a meta way), 'cause Harry never gave him what he -wanted-, and I feel bad for it. This is what happens when you start trying to please fictional characters ^^; A slippery slope, man :>

[balfrog.livejournal.com]

Yeah!

Draco grows as a person by denying himself!
Or! He could sleep around (but not with Harry), to be strong against Harry but get his yayas elsewhere.

Draco: I'm doing this for you, Potter. So we don't have a meaningless relationship based on shagging. I want you to like me for my mind.
*preens*

Harry: But... but... (thinks: use me! use me!) uh... okay.

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Hahah, me and Draco... well, I don't offer him any yayas elsewhere. See, adora_spintriae understands ^^;; I really do torture him. But I mean well! *squeaks*
I would never set him up with anyone else, not really (my inner Harry gets REALLY REALLY jealous... a lot). He has to be strong by... tu-dunn!!... growing up. In my perfect universe Harry helps him with that and then they defeat the Dark Lord together and bake cookies... *drifts off*

[balfrog.livejournal.com]

Harry: Seamus? You're sleeping with Neville? No... Absolutely not, Malfoy!

Draco: (he believed me?) Why not? It's not like you want to -

Harry: No, of course not, no, but Seamus! Sex will not solve your problems, Malfoy!

Draco: It won't?

Harry: You have to be strong.

Draco: (looks up at Harry - because in this crazy comment Harry is taller and Draco is so his bitch) Strong, yeah...

Harry: I'll help you.

Draco: How?

Harry: uh... uh.... Wanna bake some cookies?

Draco: Okay!

*facepalms*

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Harry: Don't doubt me! With your potions and my, um, flour...

Draco: You've finally cracked, haven't you. It's the jealousy. *puffs out chest*

Harry: *sputters* If you would only take me seriously, I could-- we could-- we'd be great! Like-- like Rocky and Bullwinkle! Wouldn't that be fun? Er... *looks down*

Draco: ...do I even want to know?

Harry: I'll be the moose!

Ron: TAKE THAT SOMEWHERE PRIVATE, HARRY!

[balfrog.livejournal.com]

(*was plotting silly plot things with my beta-lady, over lots of gin*)

but Draco will want his special R&B socks if he has to be the sidekick. Poor Ron. Harry's looking elsewhere for sidekick-love.

:p

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Omg, poor Harry totally didn't think of it that way, he just wants an excuse for Draco to be the flying squirrel, so then he could wear the funny hat, and possibly ride on Harry's back :>
Besides, Harry's sekritly the Lone Ranger with like, side-kicks and some guest stars and then the Leading Lady...
Draco could be one of those cute-yet-dangerous (squirrels) who breeze into town and rile up the locals at the bar, and then Harry winks at him and...

[balfrog.livejournal.com]

Now you're just teasing! *eyes go bleary with happy thought*:

Draco the squirrel latching onto Harry's back with a grin THIS big because Harry winked at him and...

*oh oh oh....*

(my poor desperate baby)

[yourpoison.livejournal.com]

Harry would wink at Draco ALL THE TIME if he knew it would get Draco to ride him. And possibly also go Yeee-hawww, but maybe that'd be too embarrassing, you never know ^^;

(Draco: Spare me your sordid cowboy fantasies, Potter, I beg you.

Harry: I bet you want to play lil-lost Mary & the Scary Wolf, instead...)

[noagirl.livejournal.com]

So very sweet. Loved it so.

[willysunny.livejournal.com]

Ooh. Your Draco is so tortured and needy. "You fucker! Come back!" Very nice.

[ravenpan.livejournal.com]

HEH!