Okay. That? Was fantastic. I mean, you really had me going there, with the nervousness, and the hesitation, and then when they finally *did* it was just gorgeous and hot and utterly perfect.
This is when they speak mostly with mounting pressure of mouth against mouth, with the screaming beat of their hearts, with the helpless twining of their fingers on the floor, slick with sweat and tight with promises they never speak except in moments like this.
That is just gorgeous.
Seriously, you have to go somewhere with this, cos I was all "woo!" and it seemed like it was rocketing toward smut and then, no. And I was very, very sad. So, please? More?
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Date: 2002-09-21 07:31 pm (UTC)This is when they speak mostly with mounting pressure of mouth against mouth, with the screaming beat of their hearts, with the helpless twining of their fingers on the floor, slick with sweat and tight with promises they never speak except in moments like this.
That is just gorgeous.
Seriously, you have to go somewhere with this, cos I was all "woo!" and it seemed like it was rocketing toward smut and then, no. And I was very, very sad. So, please? More?