~~ too subtle for this post.

In my 'Fantasy & Folklore' class, we were told the the main signs of Good (Academic??) Writing were a) clarity, b) economy & c) euphoniousness. Hahah, gotta love that word, especially since the professor immediately went on to define 'euphoniousness' as some form of purple prose (i.e., 'prettier sounding' means more elaborate? er? why?).

To me, clarity & economy are basically ways of saying the same thing, in a way-- writing should be no more and no less than what is enough to communicate the meaning. I would add another axis to that, though-- d) subtlety. Please, please god, let there be more subtlety in the world. It doesn't take away from clarity, either-- basically, in creative writing it means that you're allowed to form your own responses and opinions as the reader, without just being 'lectured' by the text.

This is my number one Reader's Pet Peeve, in other words: being lectured. Nothing turns me off more. Nothing. And yet I understand where it comes from-- it's a byproduct of academic writing and the analytical, or even business-type mindset behind it-- things must be 'clear'-- crystal clear-- and that's a Good Thing, right? It really appears that when the problem isn't sheer inexperience in a writer as far as technique & style (and this is actually easier to bear for me, personally), it's the confusion between creative & academic-style writing. If you're writing a paper, in other words, you'd want to construct a series of directly worded linear proofs, but such bluntness isn't necessarily desirable in a story if one wants the reader to suspend their disbelief rather than prove anything to them. And again and again, I feel that some of the most supposedly 'well written' & popular fanfics are trying to prove something to me about the characters (especially by means of repetition).

For instance, I really find I have to suspend my disbelief when it comes to fics where Harry willingly (happily) submits sexually to Draco from start to finish. I mean, it's not that I can't see it happening sometimes or even often, if the dynamic remains somewhat tense and it's a question of shifting vulnerabilities and temporary victories-- but since I definitely see submissive Harry as out of character, the scenario has to be handled subtly, focusing on the emotions involved and avoiding rationalization. Emotionally, one can play the correct keys in almost any sequence successfully, because it's not a linear, rational process-- one can believe in a character's emotions as long they seem to 'follow' on the most basic level. Describing the situation and having the characters be well-aware of this situation forces me, as the reader, to 'remember', which breaks any hold their emotions would have had over me.

The trick, I think, to reading things you don't believe in face-first, is for the writer to sneak them in. That's really at the heart of 'show don't tell'. It's not about subtlety or finesse for the -sake- of subtlety or finesse-- it's really because when I, at least, read a story, I don't want to think about what it's trying to tell me. In terms of romance fics, I really feel like starkly rational thought isn't necessarily one's best friend.

( It's not just me, is it? )