I like many bits of 'all torn down,' but its beginning makes me want to tear out my hair by the roots and lick the blood off the ends in frustration. Eeee. reena, I love the way you make me think and make me want to write and make me think about what I should write. Must... write... adequate... sex... scene. *runs, stares, frets, scribbles* As for the ending....!
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Date: 2003-02-09 05:26 am (UTC)Eeee. reena, I love the way you make me think and make me want to write and make me think about what I should write. Must... write... adequate... sex... scene.
*runs, stares, frets, scribbles*
As for the ending....!